You have been kind, You keep on revolving in my mind. Though you have been sweet, but I always wanted you to deplete. Why? Because you have been a little bitter, You have also been a cheater, but above all this, you have been a great teacher. So I have realised lately that you are worth remembering because by pestering you, I have learnt the art of cherishing!
– Isha Chawla
(Feel free to share any kind of suggestions/ Amendments as I felt an urge to write on this, so it’s completely raw)
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Loved it. Do try the verse option in the widgets. Your poem will be even more gorgeous❤❤❤😍😍. Keep writing. I am a huge fan of rhyme.
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Thank you so much
I feel so good right now after reading your comment.
And I’ll try that option and ma’am please tell me if there are any errors in this, because I published it instantly.
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Don’t worry, dear. I will definitely be here to assist you anytime. 😊😊😊💕💕
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Thank you.
Btw where is that option available
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When you select a block to type, you will be getting choices like Heading, Paragraph, Image, Quote, Verses etc. Or go to the WordPress icon, there will be options like statistics, posts and so on. There will be an option called appearance and select the widgets as per your choice. Add verse if you have not yet chosen.
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Ohk
Thank you 🌻
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There are tons of options (whenever you tap + option you can have them). Those options can make stuff interesting. However Wp ruins it in the reader.
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Hii Isha. Nice to read this poem. It appeared to me as if accepting someone with their faults for perhaps a symbiotic existence.
As about technicalities, I have very Little idea of English rhyme though I know something of Urdu Ghazal rhyme.
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Hii Isha. I wrote an earlier comment too. Don’t know why it didn’t get posted.
Nice to read this poem. It appeared to convey an idea of mutual symbiotic existence despite all the faults. As for rhyme, I have very little idea about English rhyme though I know something of Urdu Ghazal rhyme.
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Thank u 🌻
Tbh I don’t have much knowledge abt writing and stuff but slowly slowly I’ll gather and you can share all your knowledge about that urdu rhyme
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Indeed. You have great potential and I am eager to read your new poems.
As about Urdu rhyme, let that be a conversation for another day. That is based on Behar, Rukn and Vazn.
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Thank you!
Do read the old poems if u get time and I’ll even read ur old blog. Tbh I know nothing about Urdu.
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It is okay. Urdu is a kind of forgotten heritage in India.
I extrapolate from your surname that you are a Punjabi and probably from the family who once migrated from Pakistan. Saying this because migrant Punjabis had a great command on Urdu back then. Those were different days.
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Beautiful! A message to oneself, perhaps.
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Thank you 🌻❤️
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You’re welcome, Isha! 💖
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Beautiful lines yes our past is the mixing of happy and bitter memories but from past we learn a lot.Well shared thank you .👌👌🥰
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Thank you ! ❤️🌻
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So sweet verses 👌👌
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Thank you Sir 🌻
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🌞🌻
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🌻🦋
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U hv written by putting ur heart out… Nyc try!! 🌸
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Thank you 🌻
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🌺Welcome🌸
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You are a beautiful writer/poet Isha!!
Kindly keep sharing.
You keep doing it because you are really good at it.
With time you will get tons of ideas on how to make it interesting and creative. However I’m always happy to help you 🙂
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Thank you so much! 🌻
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It’s my pleasure!!
I am glad that my comment is alive now, haha
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Hey Isha! This is such an honest and beautiful post! ❤️I really loved how you’ve expressed the whole feeling and how beautifully you’ve rhymed it! Lots of love
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Thank you girl! ❤️🌻
Lots of love and good vibes from this side too❤️❤️
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This is really beautiful, Isha!
Loved how you expressed yourself so well. Felt that! Loved this❤❤
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Thanks girlll !!!🌻❤️🦋
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The past is a bittersweet thing. Wonderful post!
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❤️🦋
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Your raw writing is just fine, I loved it…
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Thank you 🌻🌻
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Loved it
Nice to read the poem. Beautifully written
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Thank u 🌻
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Your poetry has inspired me. I think it’s a masterpiece and absolutely breathtaking. I especially like the way you express yourself in a raw and gritty way. I liked it. Please continue writing your poetry.
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Aww!!!❤️🌻
Dude tbh these days life is pretty rough but ur comment made my day… like I was thinking to stop sharing my poetry
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Cheer up , will waiting for your next poem🙂
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❤️🌻
Till then you can check my old ones
Will upload a new one soon
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Sure😃
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Hey loved your lines👏👏✨📝. Keep writing
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Thank you ❤️🦋
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It is raw… but when taken raw, one can ‘cook’ it in their own mind, and satisfy their own taste… then even a mere cook can become a chef, and the meal a gourmet delight…!
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Aww!!❤️🌻
Thank you for such a lovely comment ❤️❤️
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